Showing posts with label Eva 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Eva 10. Show all posts

Sunday, December 6, 2009

FEAR OF DROWNING IN DEEP WATER


Hi my name is Eva I'm going to tell you about one of the more scary incidence in my life. This is one of the stories you have to be there to believe it. This story will give you the thrill of a lifetime. Okay maybe I'm exaggerating a little but well you get my point.

It was an early morning during summer break and I was visiting some friends of my mother's, in Michigan there are two boys one my age named William, and the other a year younger named Andrew. It was a warm day,(I was still I little groggy because I had just woken up) I was sitting at there very polished walnut dining table getting ready to dig into some very nice smelling chocolate blueberry pancakes. suddenly my sister Marina came clomping down the stairs just as Andrew and Williams mother, Amy was pushing the warm pancakes off the platter and on to my plate. As Marina ran down the stairs she yelled

"Hey wait for me!" nobody as usual did.
As we dug into are warm pancakes we didn't talk much because we were to busy eating the only thing we said was,
"what do you want to do today?"

Well actually nobody responded. We all knew what we wanted to do just as every day we knew that we wanted to go play in the ice cold waters of lake Michigan. When we finished eating we ran outside to play in the ice cold water.

I was playing on the knee board, but I had never been on a knee board so I didn't know that it wasn't a strange type of kick board so I straped myself in and promptly flipped over it was a cold sensation and I don't remember much for I was only age seven at the time, I just remember what I felt after flipped over I remember a cold dark fear. Not a fear that you would get after you almost tripped ,this was a fear that you would get when you almost tripped off the empire state building. I tried to scream "SOS" but my mouth was shut close as a clam. Over and over I tried to yell those three words but it was no use. I moved to another tactics I grouped for the surface but the surface was not to be found my lungs began to burn crazy thoughts raced through my head "I'm I going to die" finely my head popped above the surface just as I thought my last memory would be of the cold turning water, but then it was pulled back under no this couldn't be happening my hand graded something the buckle yes I thought I yanked as hard as I could and pop I was free I had drifted a lot farther than I would have exspeckted in that amount of time I swam back to the others cold and scared.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

The Unexpected Experience of Mr. Crunch and Ms. Stink, by Eva and Audrey


                                                                   
     "Howdy, y'all! What's doing?" joked Mr. Crumble in an Australian accent. 

     ''Nothing much, just chillin' with my new job at the Spreader Co. How are you doing?'' announced Ms. Stink.

    "Well, I'm doing fine, except the fact that your kind of sitting on me," complained Mr. Crumble.

    "Well I'm sorry it's not my fault. Just a second ago, I was resting on the big flying saucer minding my own stink, and the next thing I new I was siting on your scratchy behind!" Ms. Stink cried very loudly.

    "Harrumph," puffed Mr. Crumble.

    ''Harrumph,'' copied Ms. Stink. ''So, what should we do now?'' She asked breaking the silence. 

    "How am I supposed to know? Its hard to think when I'm being sat on. I mean there is that strange thing coming at us at a very high speed," cried Mr. Crumble, now very impatient.

   ''That's not a strange thing, that is a super strange thing! It's got five carrots sticking out of it!" yelled Ms. Stink, a little confused. 

   "Okay it's no time to argue, but I think we better do something!"whispered Mr. Crumble in a dramatic tone.

   Mr.Crumble tried to jump out of the way with Ms.Stink still on his back. But it was no hope, the strange monster thing had already trapped them in its carrot like cage.

   "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah," they screamed together.     

   Three seconds later they entered the tunnel of doom and they were never seen again. Well they were seen, but not till the end. They looked different. They felt different. They were in a different place. They were not the same.   
    
   Who are we?