My first Halloween going trick or treating without a parent. So I'm very excited because they are not there to tell me to be home by 10:00. Me and a couple of friends from my soccer team met me at Boyle Park to go together. So we started walking down sycamore and we decided that we had enough candy because our pillow cases could not hold anymore, and felt sick.So after we got there we where waiting in line and the lady who was telling when you could go in said,"go ahead."I was thinking this is not going to be scary at all, being all confident, so right as I walked in, a girl was in the bathroom screaming with fake blood all over her face and arms, and right at that moment I wanted to scream,"GET ME OUT OF HERE!" But I just held it in. In my mind I was thinking why the heck am I doing this, but it didn't matter because I was already walking into the next room.
Suddenly a bloody gorilla jumped in front of me and started grabbing me. I was thinking can this get anymore scary, but I knew that it had to be over soon, mostly because I wanted it to, but out of the random the bloody gorilla pushed me roughly into a bedroom, when suddenly a bloody girl with a knife threw her neck, started limping over to me kind of like she was shot in the leg, and she was trying to touch me. I was about to just run as fast as I could and yell for help but I could not because my friends were with me and I would look like a total nerd, so I just kept on walking to the next room,"OMG!" A bloody baby was getting a drilled through the forehead by a loony scientist and blood and guts where flying all over me, I felt disgusted. I really wanted to yell,"SOS!" But I just kept on walking.
I felt like barfing! I looked at my friends and they where freaked too! I had no idea why we did this lunatic show, we where thinking about running out but we just stood there frozen.
The people behind us where telling us to keep moving and they pushed us a bit because they
were scared out of their pants too. We kept on moving into the next room and by this point I was completely sick, disgusted, woozy, and terrified ,but before I could do anything a bloody clown jumped out of the corner of the room and screamed like he was in a tremendous amount of pain. I ran as fast as I could straight out the door and I sighed in relief. I thought to myself, what a night. My friends were freaked out too."Who wants to go again." I said sarcastically. We all started laughing and we headed back to my party. 
10 comments:
I think that It really would make a lot LESS sense I you hadn't said that this was you first halloween without you parents. So good job there. I think Its definatly SOS level.
Hey Harry,
how vould they think of grabbing you and scaring you until you almost want to barf. I wouldn't want to go inside that house.
~Max~
I absolutely love your ending. I sort of just want you to write more so I don't have to stop reading. I think if you were to put spaces in between your paragraphs it would be easier to read. I also love your S.O.S. moment when you feel like you need to yell it!
Had fun reading,
Tallulah
Harrison,
I went in the hounted house too. It was not that scary for me because I was with my dad. I thought that was a really good sos. I like how it was very detailed and I could picture it like it was really happening. Good job!
~Anna~
WO! That was a great SOS story Harrison. I can totally feel the SOS moment. Or moments. I was about to go in myself this Halloween with Sandra, Lisa, and Nik. But, when I saw the lady with the nails in her face, I backed away. You provided so much detail and fright. Even if you didn't, I would still feel it, because that is one scary house.
By the way,
~Henry~
harry, great SOS you were very descriptive. But after tricker treating I came to your house for a little bit and you were not having a party.
That would be scary did you ever tell your parrents?
That was really scary I almost went in to that.
Harrison,
I love your story. I really liked how you described the house and every thing in it.
laudi
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