Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Lost

"Mom, can we go to Nordstroms? I would like a new doll, because every five-year-old girl has three dolls, and I have only two, so I wanted one more," I said.

"OK, but in five minutes, OK?" said Mom.

"OK, I am so excited mom!" I babbled out in excitement.

"Let's go now," yelled mom.

"OK." I hopped into the car and buckled up, and asked mom to turn on the radio. I listened to some music, until we reached the mall, and then we headed to Nordstroms. When we got inside Nordstroms, I saw a lot of clothes, and jewelery, and other stuff like that. It was very pretty.

"Mom let's go up stairs, so we can look at the dolls," I said.

"OK, do you want to go up the stairs, elevator, or escalators?" asked Mom.

" Lets go up the elevator", I sparked out.

"OK," snickered Mom

As we went up the elevator, I was laughing, because my stomach totally dropped and that I did not know what it was.

We exited off the elevator and headed toward the dolls right as we got to the dolls I saw lots of cool dolls there. I thought to myself how could I ever choose one?

"I am going to go look at clothes and you stay here and decide which doll you want OK?" asked Mom.

"OK," I said.

I watched Mom walk away in the silence then I got back to picking my doll.

I had picked out my doll, it had blond hair with a polka dot dress. Then I went to Mom to show what what doll I had.

"Mom where are you?" I looked in all the clothes departments and I started to get scared.

A persson iI did not know came up to me because she saw me alone and said " What's wrong?" She said

" I lost my mom".

Then the person I did not know took me to the help counter and the person working at the help counter spoke into the intercom and said "we have a young five year old girl, with brown short hair who is looking for her mom if this is your daughter please come to the help counter."

I waited and waited, until my mom would show up she had not come, and it had been 5 minutes of fright for me.

"Mom you are back," I ran to hug her and then we bought my doll, and went to my cozy home with my new toy.

Even though ,that was a S.O.S I was so happy to have my new doll, and play with it all, day, long!



3 comments:

Jackson said...

I like how you have a lot of quotes in your story.

Maggie said...

My favorite line is:

" Lets go up the elevator", I sparked out

SPARKED is the perfect descriptive word! I can just picture you saying it.

Laudi said...

I love your story . keep up the good work.
laudi