We are going to do a conversation thread. What is a conversation thread, you ask? Well, here's how it works!
I will do a post, and all of you will need to add on by adding a comment (NOT a new post). For this thread, I am going to start off a story, and you will need to add on to it. It might get tricky if 2 of you add on at a time. If you do a draft and save it, the story may have changed when you get back to the blog next time. So, you need to comment, edit and post your comment all in one trip to the blog. Check back and see how the story is going, or wait until I read the entire thing in class!
Here's the story start:
I rubbed my eyes again. Nope, it was still there. Right in front of me, with that little sign, there were three tiny cakes. One was frothy, foamy and pinkly frosted, with a pink cake bottom. Another was green, sparkly, with a cool white cake bottom. The third was blue and yellow swirls, with a lavender cake bottom. The ornately lettered sign, done in gold paint and propped up next to the cakes, said only, "Eat me".
Who had left these cakes? And why had they left them? "Jennifer? Amy?," I called softly. Maybe my sister or my best friend were playing
a prank on me. I waited a minute, but no one popped out of the bushes.
I looked at the cakes more closely. They were under a glass dome, on a blue plate that shone as if it was lit from within. There were tiny designs on the plate, that looked as if they were faintly moving when I was not looking directly at them. If I stared at them, though, they looked just like detailed painting, nothing more. The plate was atop a pillar, white, that also shone faintly.
I stepped forward and.....(you take it from there! Don't forget to do your post as a comment, NOT as a new post)
I looked at the cakes more closely. They were under a glass dome, on a blue plate that shone as if it was lit from within. There were tiny designs on the plate, that looked as if they were faintly moving when I was not looking directly at them. If I stared at them, though, they looked just like detailed painting, nothing more. The plate was atop a pillar, white, that also shone faintly.
I stepped forward and.....(you take it from there! Don't forget to do your post as a comment, NOT as a new post)
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I took a step forward, and found myself plunging into a deep hole. Down, down, down I went. Then suddenly I heard a crash, and everything went black...
When my eyes opened I saw the strangest sight of my life. There was a lemur staring down at me, and not just any lemur. This lemur was wearing a ridicules Harry Potter outfit. I groaned and the the lemur spun around. You'll never guess what happened next. The lemur talked! He said "Hello my name is Harry Rubens ,and I am a wizard in training. What's your name?" the last thing I could do before I blacked out for the second time was say "Lauren"
The lemur looked at as if he had never heard the name before " interesting" he muttered. Then he turned around. I couldn't take it what is happening why is there a weird lemur in front of me? I felt like I was going to pass out, I made a run for it but the lemur appeared in front of me like magic and stopped me. He blinked and the cupcakes appeared again I wondered weather I should take one or not. The lemur just stared at me as if waiting for me to do something. I reached towards the cake that was green, sparkly, with a cool white cake bottom and the second I touched it I dissapered and when I opened my eyes I found myself... Take it from there guys!
But when I found myself, I was looking comletley different. I was striped all over, and I had a purple and pink polkadotted tail! Well, of course I was mortified. But the worst was yet to come. Because when I turned around, there were ten lime green cats just sitting there and staring at me with their piercing orange-red eyes. I rubbed my eyes again. No this couldn't be true. But yet it was.
Then all of a sudden, I heard a bark. Three giant Chihuahuas were chasing me and they were barking so loud that it pushed me as I ran. I was screaming for life when something popped out of midair. It was a starfish in a ball gown. It clapped "arms", and poof everthing paused. "Hola my name is Tinkerboll, and I'm am your fairygodmother." "I think I'm dreaming" I wispered, "But you aren't" He exlaimed. Then he clapped his "arms" again and poof we were at a bowling alley. "Your turn" he said. "Why did you take me here?"
The giant chihuahua said "I needed some one to go bowling with. you were the first I saw. I poofed some cakes to make you interested and then here you are. Now hurry up I've got places to go people to see "Huh" I replied in shock. Who would he talk to? Where would he go? I have to know thesethings. "Exuse me Mr. Chihuahua thing?!? I was wondering, where are you going? Who are you going to see? And What is your name? I just would like to know...
Instead of answering the chihuahua jumped on me, was he exited or mad? I guess he was mad because he said "Don't ask that type of question because everybody will think you're dumb." I'm going with King Luney. Then I asked him the stupidist question ever "Who's King Luney?" The chihuahua let out a sigh and said "Are you stupid? He's the king of this land. Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you the name of this land, It's called Luney Tunes. It's like the show but there are no charectars and it has a U not two O's and our land has an ey. I said "Cool I love Loony. But I saw the cakes again.
suddenly, the chihuahua vanished. just like that that.
wasn't everything already weird enough? I guess not.
I was all alone in the bulling alley. All the other people that were in the bulling alley vanished along with the chihuahua. suddenly I felt the ground rumble.
that wasn't a good sign. then it started to crack. that was an even worse sign. then the floor started to break open all around me. monkey's waring uniforms that said FBI started coming out of the ground everywhere, slowly closing in... on me...
Suddenly, there I was, back in front of the three cakes. But the writing on them was different. Instead of 'eat me', they said 'You have fell'. What did it mean?? Suddenly I remembered. When I stepped forward I fell. The ground split beneath my feet. Which way should I go? Then I remembered. Left is not right. Right is write. Right and left translate to write and wrong. Should I go the write way? Or should I go left, which could be wrong. I decided to go write(right). As soon as I stepped right, I was back in my classroom.
When I was in the classroom, I saw something strange. "Could it be?" I asked myself. "Yes it could be," said the lemur. This time he was in a spiderman costume though. I asked him why he was wearing a spiderman costume, and why he had worn a Harry Potter outfit, but he just blinked and said, "I am trying on costumes for Halloween." All of a sudden he clapped his hands, and I found myself surrounded in a white gooey mix.
The white gooey mix was all around me, swirling around rapidly like a tornado. Then I swam up to the top of the gooey mix. And at the top was red. I was in this red dome. And you'll never guess who was standing on a pole in the middle of the dome. The lemur! But this time he was wearing an Indiana Jones costume. "Why did you do this?" I asked, panicking. "Why? because, I like torturing little pests like you!" the lemur said happily. "But why me?" I asked. "ah, let me think. BECAUSE I WANTED TO!" he screamed. Then he clapped his hand once again, and the next thing I new I was in a plane. But I was also miles away from earth-I was in outer space. Why me?
In space, I was a sitting duck. Suddenly, I saw an explosion and a black hole! I was being sucked! I was done for! "Farewell world," I said! When I thought I was dead, Maggie greeted me. "Andrea, why are you dozing off?" she said. Maggie's voice gradually faded. I heard a faint hissing.
The lemur was back. "Aha," it said(I couldn't tell if it was a boy or girl), "I return again. What are you up to?" What should I do? I said, "Nothing."
Should I use the helpful puns to get back to my room?
suddenly, the roof of the airplane started breaking down, and more of the FBI monkeys from the bowling alley started pouring out. "Kill him my minions" barked the the lemur, who was now dressed up as batman. I was wondering why he wanted too kill me when I was about to be obliterated by the black whole anyway. the answer came quickly. I suddenly appeared in the classroom. I looked around, hoping the monkeys were gone. they weren't. each one, holding a taser-like weapon, approached me slowly. Just then, I remembered the karate lessons I had taken a few years before! thats when I decided it was time to kick some monkey butt...
The first monkey to come within striking range looked just about as confident as a monkey can look. The poor guy had no idea how big of a beating he was was about to take. I lunged at him, and kicked him in the head, knocking him back against the far wall. But, right when I was about to go for the second one, the lemur appeared in front of me, blinked, and everything went black. what next?...
When I woke up I was in a famus restrant. Lemers with chef hats on surronded me. I started to head for the fire exit when a lemer appeard in front of me and said"You must be the new helper.Your a bit strange looking arn't you. Oh well. Well here take these two plates to table 13. Hurry now."I quikly went through the double doors.I saw table 13 first thing. It was hard not to miss. There was a pretty lace table cloth and a bunch of flowers that I did not know the name of. The table was pretty but when I saw who was eating at the table I forgot all about the table. Eating at the table was Obama the person running for presedent. I went over to the table and set the plates down. When I was about to leave Obama said...
Everything was black. If I stuck my hand out I couldn't feel anything, it was like I was floating in midair, it turned out that I just was closing my eyes and when I opened them I was floating in midair. I looked around and saw the FBI monkeys I kicked one in the stomach but then an elephant came out of nowhere and said, "May the force be with you" it was really weird, at first thought the elephant was crazy. Then the Lemur dude appeared in front me and the monkeys faded away. This time he was dressed up as a sumo wrestler, and that's sorta what he tried to do to me. I put my hand in front of me, then I heard the Lemur scream, I looked up and saw the Lemur blue with blue lightning and exclaimed. "Cool the elephant gave me the force!" I started falling and I landed on some thing soft when I stood up and looked at it I gasped and yelled "SAVE ME!!!"
It was a woopie cushon filled with real farts someone heard me say save me and I saw Chuck Noris was and then I notecsest it was just the lemur with a mask on I walked away and then walked to a starbucks and had a coffe and then I saw Chu Chu Chuck Berry when I was going to say somthing a rabid racoon with a San Francico Giants hat on a ran to a outhouse. And walked out to find a monkey.
I was still in the Starbucks, when I saw the lemur walk in with two FBI monkeys, as bodyguards. The lemur was dressed as superman now. All the other people in the Starbucks pointed at him and laughed at his pathetic costume. Immediately the lemur sent his two guards out to teach the people a lesson, and more started coming out of the walls. then the lemur stared right at me, his eyes shining red with anger. he sent some of his guards to go after me too. I had two choices. I could either make a run for it, or stay and fight the monkeys...
The monkey snapped his fingers, and the lemur was back. He was back in his Harry Potter outfit. I said, just to be polite, "Hello, Harry Rubens." The lemur said, "Harry Rubens is my brother and archrival. My name is Ron Rubens." It was weird. I said to the new lemur, "Are you nice, unlike Harry?"
It said, "Yes." Should I trust the new lemur?
Yes. "Do you want to go back to your school and the children?" It said? Without thinking, I said, "Yes. Very quickly."
"Alright then," said the lemur, like he'd practiced. "What city do you live in?" "Mill Valley, California," I said.
This lemur was ridiculous. How did he know that I was a teacher? But there I was, back in my room. Everyone was gone, but the clock said 9:45 and the sky was bright! Had I slept all the way through until the weekend? "Well, there you are," said the new lemur. He twitched his ear, and the old lemur appeared.
I was glad to be back in my classroom. But why was the lemur on my side now? Something didn't feel right. "I'm going to be busy today so I'll have my servants take care of you" said the lemur. What did he mean by "take care of you." Did he mean treat nicely, or... something else? Before I had time to think about, the lemur's so called "servants" showed up. They turned out to be more of those monkeys. No big surprise. there were two them. When I glanced over they were just kinda tidying everything up. then they looked at each other, nodded, and approached me quickly. What were they doing? Before I had time to react, they each took out a taser-like weapon and the next thing I knew I was unconscious. It turned out the lemur/Ron Rubens hadn't joined me after all...
When I woke up, I was in... nowhere. literally. Everywhere I looked, all I could was gray. Was this a dream or was it real? If nothing had happened to me since I walked toward the cakes, I would have thought it was a dream for sure. But after going through all that had happened since then, I realized anything could be real. The first thought I had after I woke up besides that I was surrounded by gray, was never to trust any lemurs again. My second thought was to get out of that gray place, and teach those guys a lesson.
As it had turned out, the old Harry Rubens was back. I shouted, "Ron, come back!" "He's not coming back," said the old lemur. "Oh yes I am," said the new lemur. "Oh no you aren't," Harry contradicted. "Yes!" "No!" "YES!" "NO!" Annoyed, "YES!" I shouted. Poof! I blacked out for the fifth time.
I was in my home. The TV had been left on. "And the Rays win Game 2 of the Fall Classic. Tune into us to watch game 3 on Saturday. Thank you. This game has been brought to you by Pedi-Paws.
Good Night," the announcer said one last time, and I was in my bed. I slept in, until my three-year-old son woke me up. "Wets watch cawtoons!" he said. "Hush," I said. "It's not even Saturday." "Aww you shoe?" he said. I blacked out for the sixth time. "Mommy?" he said confused.
"Mush," I heard someone say. Was I at the Iditarod race in only a sleeping gown? "Haw," the voice said again. "What do you think, Adam?" it said a third time. Was I at M5 industries? Yes, those people were definitely Jamie Hyneman and Adam Savage. "Take two," said the cameraman. Jamie repeated his routine, this time with only two dogs and on a roller chair. The cameraman gave Jamie the thumbs up and said, "You're good." Then I blacked out for the seventh time.
The three cakes were back a third time. I stepped forward, removed the glass dome, and took a bite out of the one with blue and yellow swirls with a lavender cake bottom. My favorite! Chocolate with marshmallows! I looked at the sign again. This time it said 'Oh no!' Did it mean that the security system had failed? Then I spun around and there was the chihuahua. I stuck my hand out and said, "Stop!" but happen it did not. The the chihuahua yelped. It vanished and there were the monkeys. I put my hand in front of them. They vanished and the old lemur said, "My minions, you have failed!" I defeated the monkeys! With my hand still sticking out, the lemur and I fell into the hole. I looked down and the bottom was getting ever closer. I shouted, "May the force be with me!" and pointed my hand down. Just as I was about to reach the bottom, I slowed down and bounced back up, but the old lemur went splat into the bottom of the hole! I was safe and still had the force! Ron said, "That should finish you off, Harry!" I blacked out for the eighth time.
I found myself in a spaceship on Mars. Then I saw a lemur in a Spongebob suit. Hello Ron. I am not Ron I am Snape Jovanovic. I am Harry Rubens best friend. Then I saw aliens with a FBI shit. GO MINONS! They had giant clubs with spikes and there are millions of them gaining on me and then out of noware the Elphant jumped out with a light saber and started slicing them all into millions of pieces I started kicking them in the head and then the Elphant was gone. Then my pocket felt very heavy I reached in and pulled out a light saber and went to the spaceship to chace snape but I didn't have to because I saw him behind me. He tookout his light saber so did I and then we started fighting I choped his head off and it grew back and he said I can not die on Mars so I brang him to Earth threw him in a hole and threw in a...
Suddenly, I woke up. I was still in that gray place! Had I dreamed all of this? I guess so. But my dream reminded me that I had force. I forgot all about it. suddenly, a bunch of FBI HUMANS appeared all around me. Their faces were made out of cake and they carried machine-guns. Then a bunch of chihuahuas, and lemurs, and FBI monkeys appeared. What the **** was going on. Every one of the lemurs was wearing a bikini, and a hula skirt. The monkeys all had RPG's and M16's, and the chihuahuas had a variety of sunglasses. They were all dancing to a boom box playing music in the middle. Was this some kind of random party or what?...
While I was observing the strange party, something caught my eye. Off to the side of everything else, I saw the three cakes. I walked closer to get a better look. This time, the cakes looked a lot more delicious. The sign on them said "Get ready for the unexpected." What could that mean? I reached over and picked up one of them. Right when I was about to take a bite out of it, it grew arms and legs and punched me in the stomach. I was so suprised that I fell on my back. then the cake got in my face, pointed a black finger directly at me, and said "Don,t mess with me or I WILL pwn you in your face." Then he cocked his head to one side, popped his collar in my face, and slowly strutted away, every once in a while looking back at me with a sneer. then he jumped on the pillar where all the other cakes were, and morphed back into the cake he was. The best way I could describe him was "gangster."
The same elephant came out of nowhere, light saber in paw. He sliced off the cake's limbs and took a bite out of the green, sparkly one with a white cake bottom. Suddenly, I saw the elephant moving backwards, the limbs flying back on to the cake, blacking out, falling downwards, the old lemur flying upwards, blacking out again, the World Series game 2, using the force on the lemur, Obama, my room, the floor closing up, the FBI monkeys, the bowling alley, Luney Tunes, the chihuahuas, Tinkerboll, the lemur in a Harry Potter outfit, then, finally, getting sucked up through the hole and the three cakes with the sign that said, 'Eat me'.
I closed my eyes and then opend them again. "Hu" I was in front of a huge crowd. Ther was silence in the stadium. All eyes were focused on me, I never was so scared in my whole life before. Then I saw the three cakes again. It was like a never ending, scary adventure. And I felt like grabbing one. I got a hold of the blue, orang swirlie cake. The same moment I toke a bite of it the big Chihuahua. I got so scard, and....
everything went black. "Help me!" I shouted. For the tenth time, everything went black. When I woke up, I was a plane. I was weightless. But I was also on Earth! I checked the walls. They read, 'Zero G. The weightless experience.' "Hit the floor!" the pilot warned, which is just what I did. Right after, he said "Up!" and I floated to the ceiling. The same happened, and when I got off, the pilot winked at me. He wasn't just any pilot, though. He was the lemur, back from the dead! I ran for the three cakes which had just poofed, and...
I blacked out for the 11th time for no reason, apparently the forse was no longer with me. I woke up. "Where am I now" I groand. An unfamiliar voice answered, "where do you think" the voice sounded robotic. "What?" I asked sitting up.I opened my eyes to find myself shivering. I was on pluto. The robotic creacher turned ot to be an alien. It had huge gray eyes and and had slimy green skin. "Uhg" I gagged. I looked around there where FBI aliens they threw a net over my before I could do a thing. I tried to stand up it didn't turn out very well I just flopped right back down again.
Then I blacked out and found myself.....
the chihuahua appeared. "Back to visit King Luney?" I asked. "Yes," it said. "He just got off of his Zero G flight."
Oh no! Did this mean that King Luney was code-named Harry Rubens? I guess so.
I rubbed my eyes again. Nope, It wasn't true. I saw my son. I ran forward to greet him and I slammed into a glass wall.
I suddenly woke up! I was STILL in that gray place. I had just fallen asleep after the gangster cake made it's point. the cakes were still sitting in the same place. Why did I keep on falling asleep in that place? it didn't make sense. All the lemurs and monkeys were still dancing to the boom box. There were also those guys with machine-guns, whose heads were made out of cake. Who were they? Suddenly, a big voice boomed throughout the place. It was the lemur's voice! It said "This is where we kill our prisoners, Andrea." Then all the lemurs, monkeys, and cake faces disappeared. FBI monkeys started appearing everywhere. They had RPG's, and machine-guns. There was nowhere to run. I was trapped!...
Suddenly, I said moo. then the elefant appeared with cows and kicked the lemar. the lemar ate a cake and became a cow. "Now I am better!" the Cow mooed. Then he mooed and every thing disappeared, and John Conner came with an FBI monkey and said go write. I paused, and then I forse pushed him to nowere. Then I was a lemar and saw the three cakes. I moved right and there was Harry Rubens saying: "I see you joined us now...
One of the monkeys charged at me. But before he got the chance to fire his weapon, I cloths-lined him, and took his RPG. Then I fired it into the rest of the monkeys. What I saw next was a gruesome but awsome sight. I probably don't need to explain what happened for you to know. Anyway, there were barely any monkeys left after the explosion. Suddenly I heard the lemur's booming voice again. It said "well I guess you're not as weak as I thought you were. Well we'll see about that." "Howdy partner" said something behind me. I turned around to see the cake with the lavender bottom waring a cowboy hat, jacket, and boots. It was a ridiculous outfit. "Stop distracting me" I said." "I've got monkeys to ki-" before I could finish my sentence I heard the sound of bullets being fired. I ducked down just in time to hear them whizzing over my head. I turned around, and saw the monkey who was firing at me. Before he could shoot again I shot him with my RPG. When I was about to look for another monkey I heard the sound of more bullets being shot nearby. Before I had time to duck, I felt a painful stinging sensation and hit the ground face-first. The last thing I did before I blacked out was look up to see a monkey standing over me, grinning...
The monkey gave a mean laugh and right under his breath he said "loser". When I woke up I was in a metal seat,my arms,my legs well my whole body was straped to the chair.
Blink a little light came on right over my head, I heard a click,click then when my eyes got used to the dark I saw all of these monkeys around me then I saw the monkey that laughed at me, wait that click was a gun! then one of the monkeys stepped up and it was the one I've met before he whispered into my ear and said...
"I'm going to do what Hairy Rubens has always wanted me to do." I didn't want to think about what he meant by that. What I wanted to think about was any way I could escape. The monkey slowly raised his gun on my head. "It's too bad it had to end this way" he said sarcastically. I stiffened. He tightened his finger on the trigger-"click." nothing happened. He pulled the trigger again-"click." Still nothing. He turned the gun sideways and stared at it oddly, as if examining it, and blushed. He was actually embarassed. I started snickering. When he saw me his embarassment quickly turned to Anger. Oh no...
Ahh! I saw the monkey and then he turned into a giant banana! What? Now I was really confused and I wondered why he turned into a banana. I looked at his gun and that gun wasn't real it was a fake that makes you into a giant banana when you shoot it. So I wondered if he was actually a banana so I went and peeled his skin and then I saw his face but the rest of him was a banana! Then I saw swirls and I got sucked into a giant hole! Where did the hole lead and why did I feel so itchy? Then I saw that I was a furry monkey and I saw myself and I was on a boat whose boat was it? And what was the hole I fell into and where did it go? Wait. That hole was a time machine and I wasn't on a boat at all. I was in a gingerbread boat... in candyland!!
Hey guys, let's tone down the violence. Remember this IS school work...
I took a bite out of the boat to find out that I was no longer a hairy monkey. Yum! When I reached land I took a bite out of the fresh, tasty chocolate soil. Suddenly I vanished, and I was limbless with a rounded bottom. The television said, "Weebles wobble but they don't fa-" I had my limbs back, and I was at a casino. "-so remember to stay at fabulous Las Vegas!"
"Stop changing the channel! I want to be back in that Candyland™ commercial!" My son obeyed and everything went black. What next?
After I realized that I was on a gingerbread boat, I jumped up and took a big bite of the gingerbread. And yes emmm it was so good.It was so good that when I started to eat I couldn't stop! I started to just want more and more of it after a good two hours, I was so fat that when I got up off the ground the boat started to sink! I sat there waiting to think of something when it came to me I would have to eat all of it so I could float. so I ate all of it and I was floating! I was trying to swim through the chocalit milk but my arm were to fat to go any where. I was just a big fatty swimming in circles and getting know where then I saw a guy in the distance it was... Harry Rubens he was on a lollypop ship with gum drops covering the holes I yelled...
"Save me." Harry Rubens looked over at me and started laughing. "How do you expect me to do that" he yelled back. Suddenly FBI monkeys with snorkeling masks on came out of the water, and started swimming towards me. I couldn't swim away because I was too fat. They all grabbed me and started pulling me towards the boat. Then I remembered the force. I used the force on all the monkeys and sent them flying to next week. "That won't be the end of me" I heard the lemur yell. More of the same FBI monkeys started coming out of the water. I did the same thing them. "It doesn't matter how many attack me" I yelled to the lemur. But he still didn't give up. I defended myself from wave after wave. Finally they stopped coming after me like after ten waves. What would the lemur do now?...
Eek!!!! I screamed. A shower of melted chocolate was falling. I couldn't see anything. Everything was just brown. Then, I started deflating. I wasn't fat anymore! Suddenly, I heard a sharp click behind me, and felt cold metal against my wrists. I gasped as the rain dripped away and I found the smiling lemur staring down at me. Two FBI monkeys were standing beside him, holding and umbrella above his head.
It stopped raining. I used the force on the FBI monkeys that were with the lemur. Then I tried to use the force on the lemur, but he stuck out his hand and nothing happened. Then a bunch of FBI monkeys with wings came and started flying towards me. Then I grew wings, and started flying towards shore. The sandy beach was made out of poprocks. Then I looked at the middle of the island, and saw a giant candy castle. I wondered what was inside it...
I flew inside it. I picked up a chocolate bar, ate half of it, tucked the rest under my wing, and left. I soon felt a strange feeling. The candy bar was large, and I couldn't feel my arms. I looked down and discovered that I'd become a hummingbird. Suddenly, I transformed back into me, and the tree I'd been flying at transformed into a lemur. Suddenly I felt really tiny with lots of extra legs, eyes, and no arms. I looked back and found I was a spider, I blinked to change back into me, and screamed in the lemur's ear, "STOP DOING THIS TO ME!" The lemur looked frightened, and ran away. More of the FBI monkeys appeared in front of me.
I woke up, and I was STILL in the same gray place. Finally, I spotted a trapdoor that I was standing on, and I left. Just as I wondered why I keep falling asleep after a major event happened, I woke up, back in the bowling alley.
"Long time, no see," said the chihuahua. I finally figured out a way out of the gray place! "How long?" I said. "Five years." Time in Luney Tunes goes that fast? I'd only been gone for 26 hours! "Going out with King Luney?" I said. "Who's King Luney?" it responded. I wasn't in Luney Tunes after all! I rubbed my eyes again, and woke up. I was in front of the three cakes, complete with sign. It looked like everything after was a dream, but this wasn't possible, since everything seemed so realistic. Then I heard a meow and seven fluffy cats were right behind me. They purred, and a significant barking was heard. I saw two dogs behind me. You'll never guess what happened! A soft voice said, "You're in Pet Land. It's where us homeless animals come, hoping to find new, nice owners. Many of us have had mean owners, but some just escaped from the Pound." It sounded horrible. I definitely wanted one of the poor creatures.
Suddenly all the cats and dogs disappeared and more FBI monkeys came out of the ground. They all started running at me. They all swords. Then I felt something hit me in the back and everything went black. When I woke up I was in the gray place. "AAAHHHGGG!..."
I heard a far of hissing noise. The lemur! "Hello there" he said. "Why are you doing these things to me" I said. Instead of answering he clapped his hands and I was back in candyland. I was on a laughy tafy surf board in the chocolate ocean. I was catching great chocolate waves. I got board of surfing, and went to explore the shore. Then I saw a bunch of flying FBI monkeys with snorkeling masks, and used the force on them. I wondered when the lemur would find something better to unleash on me, because as long as I had the force I could deal with the FBI monkeys easily. I was still on the beach when more FBI monkeys came. This time they had some sort of shield. I tried to use the force on them, but they just held up their shields and nothing happened. "Not so strong now are you" I heard the lemur say. I turned around and saw him lying on a beach chair...
I used the force to keep me safe, turned the chair, and dumped the lemur in the chocolate ocean. A giant wave came, and the lemur said, "Aah! I'm drowning! I'm melting!" I woke up, and the monkeys had vanished. When I'd woke up, I was back in the bowling alley. I'd just fallen asleep after the new chihuahua had informed me I was no longer in Luney Tunes. There were the three cakes, "gangster" cake with limbs, ready to strike. I used the force on it, and the limbs fell of. I rubbed my eyes for the fifth time, and found myselfat the the bottom of a deep pit. But when I found myself...
I was made out of chocolate! "mmmm I love chocolate" I heard someone say. I turned around and saw the chihuahua. He was licking his lips. Then a bunch of FBI monkeys came, and dragged him away. "Can't I just have one bite" the chihuahua pleaded. The monkeys said nothing and kept on dragging him to wherever they were going. Then I heard a clap, and I was back in the gray place. Did I say gray? I meant green. Yes, this time it was green. I looked around and saw the lemur playing rock and roll drums. There were also two FBI monkeys playing electric guitar with him. "You like my band?" he said. Then he signaled his band to stop, and clapped his hands. I was back in candyland. I was in a plane made of air heads. I flew over to the candy castle, and went inside to find...
To Samuel and Bowen,
Please do not add more to this thread. Check your gmail account for further, TOP SECRET instructions.
Good luck...
Maggie
(p.s. TOP SECRET instruction means that you may not tell your classmates)
i went in to find...
one of the tastiest looking things I had ever seen in my whole entire life, a giant butterscotch, marshmellow, chocolate bar ever as i leaned over to take a bite just as the chocolate touched my lips I heard and echoing clap bouncing of every crack corner, well basically any surface in the castle tower. I looked around, surprised and when I looked up I saw a giant ring pop, and awestruck I began to fly up to it and i grabbed it, it giving me special powers, I turned around looking finding myself face to face with the lemur, it made me jump! Not knowing what to say I said nice Barbie costume in a puzzled voice. Doing it almost automatically, I stuffed the ring pop into the lemurs mouth and he dissapeared suddenly the voice of FBI monkeys echoed again saying " You are our leader, you have killed our leader, all hail new leader!"" ALL HAIL HIM, ALL HAIL HIM" they screeched I jumped up in the air " I KILLED HIM" i annouced gleefuly and suddenly...
The FBI monkeys stopped dead in their tracks. They all dragged their eyes slowly from me to the lemur, then back. then, they bowed down to me. I gasped in surprise. They were making me their new king! I wondered if they would carry me on their shoulders. Then, suddenly, they stood up and put me on their shoulders. I gasped again: They could read my mind! The leader of the monkeys, a big, grey one, replied slurrily: Why, yes we can. I thought you knew by now. then, they carried me home, all the way.
THE END
Hold up, narrator. Please turn the page. Are you sure that is the end?
HA! Got you! That was a fake!(on with the story)
"FBI Monkeys? Are you sure?" I said, and they freaked out so much that they started killing each other. Lots of gore and blood went flying. I started screaming so loud that I had to plug my ears and shut my eyes. When I opened my eyes I was in a different scene.
I was in my bedroom, and it was dark. I could hear my son crying.
"Having a nightmare, honey?" my husband said. "Have a cake." I bit into the one with blue and yellow swirls, with a lavender cake bottom to find it tasted like melted chocolate and caramel.
This time, the real
THE END
To bad its not the end! The cake tasted so good that I had to have more so I looked around. All I saw was a remote. at the top is said, lemur 55, more cake 48, black out 29. I pressed 48. maybe this was wrong I don't know.
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